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Real name: KevinJGuhl
Member Since: 17/05/03
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Reviews by KevinJGuhl
Explores the relationships between Ironhide and Chromia and Optimus Prime and Elita One.

Rated: G
Categories: Generation One
Characters: None
Genre: Essay
Location: Library

Series: fania
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 634 - Hits: 1276
Complete?: Yes - Published: 01/05/08 - Last Updated: 01/05/08
Reviewer: KevinJGuhl Signed star star star star half star
Date: 11/09/03 Title: Chapter 1: Relationships: Ironhide And Chromia, Prime And Elita

Very throught-provoking. Not only on the relationship of those fictional characters, but on the structure of real-life relationships. You know how to dissect and evoke romanticism all in one little essay. I really look forward to reading some of your other works, such as Invisible Boyfriend.

Chromia and the other female Autobots are coming to Earth, so why isn't Ironhide looking forward to it?

Rated: G
Categories: Generation One
Characters: None
Genre: Romance and Adventure
Location: Library

Series: fania
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 4919 - Hits: 773
Complete?: Yes - Published: 01/05/08 - Last Updated: 01/05/08
Reviewer: KevinJGuhl Signed star star star half star
Date: 11/09/03 Title: Chapter 1: On The Verge

This was a really cute story. You wrote the relationships in a believeable way and Ironhide's characterization was well done. I like seeing how the relationship between the two built to what we see in the beginning of the story. You convincingly captured the sexual tension between them. My only gripe is that at times the story was hard to follow. I think you just needed some story breaks and perhaps a bit more description. I would like to see more stories like this set in the same time, perhaps telling about how the other femmes met Powerglide and Inferno.

Hound takes some time to enjoy the snow. (Suggested listening: Duran Duran's 'Perfect Day' from their 'Thank You' album.)

Rated: G
Categories: Generation One
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Location: Library

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 498 - Hits: 686
Complete?: Yes - Published: 14/12/02 - Last Updated: 14/12/02
Reviewer: KevinJGuhl Signed star star star star
Date: 19/05/03 Title: Chapter 1: It Figures

The purpose of my review here is twofold. First of all, I liked this vignette and thought it nicely delved into a quiet moment of Hound's. Your prose flows nicely and your description is well-executed. Through the imagery, I felt I was sitting there with Hound on a relaxing day. Second of all, I wanted to thank you for your feedback on "Turbulence." While most people really like that sorry and I'm glad about that, your criticism about the imagery falling short made me think about my writing. Even though I wrote that years ago, I still have a tendency to tell and not describe in my current fiction. Examining that, I believe, has helped.

Megatronís come up with something that humanity canít resist (if you think this is a serious fanfic, youíre going to be sadly disappointed!)

Rated: G
Categories: Generation One
Characters: None
Genre: Comedy
Location: Library

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 1567 - Hits: 1724
Complete?: Yes - Published: 29/03/03 - Last Updated: 29/03/03
Reviewer: KevinJGuhl Signed star star star star
Date: 16/09/03 Title: Chapter 1: The Plan That Worked

Biblical! I am...addicted! Must have more! More!

The very first Transformers drabble. A drabble is a piece of writing that is exactly 100 words long, excluding the title. In this particular drabble, Spittor goes to a bank and reveals the secret of his paternity.

Rated: G
Categories: Generation One
Characters: None
Genre: Drabble
Location: Library

Series: Silly Stuff
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 253 - Hits: 991
Complete?: Yes - Published: 02/05/03 - Last Updated: 02/05/03
Reviewer: KevinJGuhl Signed star star star star
Date: 20/08/04 Title: Chapter 1: Spittor Gets A Bank Loan

Clever, clever drabble. Is this what drunken Transfans do after hours at Botcon?

Frenzy is sitting in cupboard but why is he so upset?

Rated: G
Categories: Generation One
Characters: None
Genre: Comedy
Location: Library

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 570 - Hits: 994
Complete?: Yes - Published: 17/05/03 - Last Updated: 17/05/03
Reviewer: KevinJGuhl Signed star star star star
Date: 19/05/03 Title: Chapter 1: An Autograph

This was very short and worked for me. You really got me in the beginning with the thought that someone had hurt Frenzy and I laughed when you revealed he was just reading a book. Frenzy's nervousness and embarrassment are humorous and well-written, as is his interaction with brother Rumble. It is amusing to think that even these Decepticons have been caught up in the world of Harry Potter. The only thing I didn'y buy was the author's lack of reaction to seeing a 7-foot tall robot.

A parody of one of the many songs from the movie My Fair Lady.

Rated: G
Categories: Generation One
Characters: None
Genre: Song Parody
Location: Library

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 278 - Hits: 342
Complete?: Yes - Published: 19/05/03 - Last Updated: 19/05/03
Reviewer: KevinJGuhl Signed star star star
Date: 19/05/03 Title: Chapter 1: Get Me To The Ark On Time

Cute. "Whopper" was an inspired rhyme.

Like the titles says, it's Megatron watching, waiting and planning.

Rated: G
Categories: Generation One
Characters: None
Genre: Colour Illustration
Location: Gallery

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 0 - Hits: 597
Complete?: Yes - Published: 16/08/04 - Last Updated: 16/08/04
Reviewer: KevinJGuhl Signed star star star star half star
Date: 20/08/04 Title: Chapter 1: Watching, Waiting, Planning

This pic jumped out at me because it really captures the feel of Megatron lost in thought in the wide vacuum of space.