Very nice, Bill. It was touching, and took some nice liberties with the RiD universe -- I especially enjoyed your implementation of the 'Scramble City' gimmick. My only real complaint would be the lack of section breaks; their ommisions had me doing double-takes every time the story switched scenes. Still, awesome job.
Well done. It wraps up the 'Andraxus' story very nicely and appropriately. And soooo much happens in this last part...wow. I had to knock a point or so off my rating for what seemed to me to be a *lot* of errors that could have been fixed up with some simple editing. But still...absolutely amazing stuff!