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Robots In Disguise: Tragedy by fangwing

Rated: G • starstarstarstar
Summary: Inspired by the events of September 11, 2001.
Reviewer: SaltManZ Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 04/02/03 Title: Chapter 1: Robots In Disguise: Tragedy

Very nice, Bill. It was touching, and took some nice liberties with the RiD universe -- I especially enjoyed your implementation of the 'Scramble City' gimmick. My only real complaint would be the lack of section breaks; their ommisions had me doing double-takes every time the story switched scenes. Still, awesome job.



Andraxus 7: Starscream, The Lord Commander by Belinda_Kelly

Rated: G • starstarstarstarhalf-star Feature
Summary: In this final chapter of the Andraxus sequence, Starscream is forced to confront the real lords of Andraxus and to uncover the secrets locked away in his own mind...
Reviewer: SaltManZ Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 17/02/03 Title: Chapter 1: Starscream, The Lord Commander

Well done. It wraps up the 'Andraxus' story very nicely and appropriately. And soooo much happens in this last part...wow. I had to knock a point or so off my rating for what seemed to me to be a *lot* of errors that could have been fixed up with some simple editing. But still...absolutely amazing stuff!