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Batteries Not Included by Bobbi_Carothers

Rated: G • starstarstarstarhalf-star
Summary: After a terrible accident involving Optimus Prime, Bobbi Carothers is revived in a form she finds extremely familiar.
Reviewer: kidu Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 06/08/02 Title: Chapter 1: Batteries Not Included

He-e-ey, it's a Saturn-bot! I wanted to see one of those, and now I don't have to do it myself, because you did. And very, very nicely described. I love the amount of sensory detail, both human and otherworldly, that you impart as a natural part of the narrative. I did get snagged by the quote thing, as Reu mentioned, but ...oh well. Well done, overall. Only one question: Did NiCad decide to stay a TF even though there was a chance she could go back to being human, or did Ratchet later revise his estimation to say she simply couldn't go back?



A Better Breed Of Hero by Raksha

Rated: G • starstarstarstarhalf-star Feature
Summary: A hero may be someone who swoops to your rescue when you're in trouble - but a better breed of hero is someone who inspires you to stand up and fight for yourself.
Reviewer: kidu Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 06/08/02 Title: Chapter 1: A Better Breed Of Hero

Raksha, thank you. You have very well articulated one of the better qualities of the Decepticons. (IMHO, they have both good and bad aspects, but my opinion is not at all the point here.) Your take is well-written enough that I can focus on the writing and the craft of the argument and appreciate those separately, and the notion of Decepticon high standards, as opposed to cowardice or lack of caring, was thoughtfully chosen on your part. On the other hand, I do have a lot of difficulty with the idea of a life-support machine named Megatron. Wouldn't that be ... demeaning to someone who is ordinarily a superweapon? And if I were physically attached to something I imagined as Starscream, I'd be worried he'd decide he had something more important to do, like lead the Decepticons! *g*



Into the Labyrinth by Velvet_Glove

Rated: G • starstarstarstarhalf-star
Summary: While exploring what appears to be a ghost-ship drifting through space, five Autobots get more than they bargained for.
Reviewer: kidu Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14/07/02 Title: Chapter 1: Into the Labyrinth

The author here achieves her goal of writing a plausible third season episode with the depth permitted by prose writing, without sacrificing the pace, the action and the wit of the cartoon. All five canon characters are well-written. Although writing cliches are used, they aren't cop-outs or shortcuts, but perfectly reasonable extensions of the characters and of the situation. The prose is smooth and conveys the setting well. Excellent work!



Lucifer Over London by KoiLungFish

Rated: G • starstarstarstarhalf-star
Summary: The Decepticons attack Heathrow Airport, England ::WARNING Heavy religious themes::
Reviewer: kidu Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 21/12/03 Title: Chapter 1: Lucifer Over London

(Already picked this one apart elsewhere, so short version of review.) Koipoetry, as demonstrated here, is lyrical, full of assonance and generally lovely to read aloud. It brings itself to closure; it shows depth and draws in enough concepts to indicate a great deal of thought. The borrowed lyrics are integrated flawlessly. Most of all, it is unique. Fanpoetry is rare to begin with, much less classically themed fanpoetry. The small downside is that the effort required to read and appreciate Koipoetry is akin to that required to fully grasp Edgar Allen Poe. Would a T.S. Eliot not be enough? Notwithstanding this, I call it a cut above.



The Ballad Of The Silver Soldier by Arashi

Rated: G • starstarstarstarhalf-star
Summary: This ballad is an original tune written in the style of the old-time folk songs and ballads from the Appalachian Mountains of the South Eastern United States. This song was written in a passion to keep old-time and roots music alive- with a modern t
Reviewer: kidu Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17/09/02 Title: Chapter 1: The Ballad Of The Silver Soldier

Very nice... unusual to see TF in poetry that works well. The format and the content mesh nicely, and the ballad format is nicely carried off, rhyme, dialect and all. Bonus points for sheer individuality.



For All the Days Left Long Behind by Pitten

Rated: G • starstarstarstarhalf-star
Summary: In the wake of great change, Carly finds an unlikely kindred spirit. (Set after "The Rebirth.")
Reviewer: kidu Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 06/05/03 Title: Chapter 1: For All the Days Left Long Behind

I finally got around to checking this out... Thank you. I thought the Daniel-Arcee relationship didn't get enough time in Rebirth to fully explore it, and of course there was no follow-up... particularly not with Carly or even Spike, which is a disappointment after the strong Sparkplug-Spike relationship in earlier seasons. You've covered it well, handled more than just Rebirth with this. Despite a few jolts from a detail or word here and there, I'm about ready to file this as 'extended canon, do not ignore'.



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Reviewer: kidu Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21/12/03 Title: None

I refuse to review this thing in chapter-size pieces any more. Stormhangar... the entirety of it... is one of the finest pieces of Transfic I have ever read. Period. It is eloquent, it is unsettling, it is original and it fits the canon. You are also quite responsible for making me see Megatron in a new light. Thank you.