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The best essays writing a story is looking interesting. As I don’t like reading much specially I get bored sooner while reading a story but from when I have started reading this story my interest getting increased day by day. Will share my final comments when the story will be complete.
Oh! Jazzbot, I am so gonna have to hurt you if you don't have the next part up soon!!!! That was a fantastic beginning!!!! I loved it!!!! *okay, getting hold of self* Prowl with a sister who is loved by Sideswipe. Now if that is not the most amusing awkward of circumstances!!! LOL!!! And I like her!!! She has come across as a thorough character with intelligence and wit. And it's interesting to see the extension of Prowl's emotions as begun by Jazzy in her fics. Nice job with that!!! :) So . . . yeah . . . more!!!!! And Jazzy, thanks for letting Jazzbot borrow your character!!! :D
Ooo, nice to be able to read this in chronological order, mi Pura-Jo! Ah, Jazzy is just so glad that you've decided to put your hand to one of her fave characters (mi Prowly god) and I think Pura turned out great! Yeah, yeah, Whirl-girl, it's an old story, but all stories are old. ^_^ It's the new character that makes it great! ^_^ It's only a nine cuz I thought the revelation of Pura's backstory was still a bit too rushed, but I know the next tale will build on all this spiffy suspense!
You asked me to send you a review for this story, and you've got it. This was very well done--as usual. Have to admit, you almost had me thinking Prowl was going to have a hard time throughout the story regaining Pura's trust once he he came back to his senses. I laughed at the part where Sideswipe asks Pura if he can have the, so-called, 'mouse' for a prank on her brother when she manages to catch it. Keep up the good work!!
Wow! This is definitely one of your better stories, JazzBot! Interesting plot, with a big cliffhanger at the end. Can't wait till part 2! Fan-created characters are often tricky to handle because they usually end up being too perfect and prone to "Mary-Sue" syndrome. Pura is one of the few characters who escapes this. She is an interesting new arrival with her own distinct personality flaws and quirks. She is not perfect, but she tries hard to make do with what she's got. I really look forward to reading the next parts to see what happens. Excellent job!
9.5 on this one! Jazzbot takes Prowl along for a ride.... I'm pretty sure the assumed-dead-sister-reappears-and-causes-havoc-theme has been done before (go Jazzy!), but I'm not complaining about this beginning. You've got lots of suspense happening throughout the fic, little bits of foreshadowing to remember later on, and a great cliffhangar to top it off. Here's to part two!