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Name: Anonymous (Signed) · Date: 28/10/03 - 09:10 am · For Chapter: Teeth of the Lab Rat
Between this and your other works, I fail to see how anyone can come away from your work anything less than Perceptor-neutral, at worst. ;) There's a lot of ingenuity at work here, from an irrational Quintesson to a Perceptor with multiple personalities that... aren't quite multiple personalities. It's brilliant, and though limited too only settings in the entire thing, it's always fresh, interesting, and thought-provoking; excuse me whilst I track down and maim he that gave you the rating of three.

I regret not giving you a straight ten, but commas seem curiously absent in many spots, and some of the sentences come off clunky, and I feel something could have easily been done to better distinguish the breaks from Perceptor's mind-space to reality. But you earn serious points for originality and lovely use of language and vocabulary -- a must for *anyone* endeavoring to write Perceptor. You even clearly define the guy in so many sentences by Jazz, and that has to count for something. Summing someone up in a few sentences is not quite easy, no.

And I must compliment your Jazz. He came across as a mech nothing less than hilarious(the scene with the hailing Quintesson will forever be graven in my memory), but he has a serious edge, and he knows people. Well, I might add. It's good, good work, mein Princess. :)



Name: Sheba (Signed) · Date: 20/09/02 - 02:32 am · For Chapter: Teeth of the Lab Rat
This was pretty good. I liked the idea of Perceptor's "internal struggle". LOL about the Plot Bunnies in the Authors note. Never thought of it that way before.


Name: Velvet Glove (Signed) · Date: 19/09/02 - 05:15 pm · For Chapter: Teeth of the Lab Rat
Now this is interesting! Even if you did make me think, which isn't what I read fanfic for! A fascinating idea with or without Transformers, and beautifully applied to Perceptor. It's very nice to see Jazz taking a leading role with the post-movie Autobots too. And speaking as a Springer fan, I really liked him here!


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