Reviews For Spiral
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Reviewer: Pitten Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 28/10/03 - 06:07 am Title: Spiral

Funny that you should consider this story poor when it's, perhaps, my favorite by you. It's constructed very well, a story that spirals to a point much like the spiral spoken about throughout the fic. And I like Rampage's backstory - a victim to a degree, yes, but one responsible all the same. I thought his origin was very original.

Besides that, Depth Charge's narrative is just perfect, blending well his bitterness, hatred, and regret. Those ending lines, though short and blunt, are perfect for his character.

A fantastic story. ;-) Can't wait to read more from you.

-Pitten

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